Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 Today we finish answering some questions on canvas and worked on our essay. Today I learned how artificial intelligence is getting so much power of technology that teachers can’t tell weather it’s human of technology work , which is mind blowing how things can get out of hand . Some things I would change is the grammar . Another thing is remove words that aren’t needed in my paragraph . I would go over it and make sure it makes sense. 

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