Angy's English Blog

 Today we worked on the assignment we had . Today I learned that at times we will have to face rude and selfish people who is a wannabe but instead you gotta be the bigger person and focus on your goals . It could have more meaning because maybe in her cultural is more than just that . They wanna help those who don’t have lunch to eat and instead of throwing the leftovers to trash she prefers to give to people who need it maybe she was taught that way from her grandma . 

 Today we finished on our projects. I learned how people can face difficult situations but still put a smile on their faces  and show the best of theirselves . I believed before that carne asada was only for parties but no it’s a tradition of Mexican doing that food for family for welcoming have a good time enjoying food . 

 Today we continued to work on our assignment about food culture . Today I learned on how to behave better to do better in life and know the people I hang with. Tamales is a must have because it represents of they would make them back in Mexico the time and effort and love they put in them . 

 Today we finished our essay . Today I learned  that sometimes trying to put your trust into someone isn’t always the right move and always be aware of your surroundings never leave your guard down. A found that would remind me of culture and family out be una carne  asada fest with guacamole r, Mexican rice, nopales, and jalapeño wrapped with bacon and cheese inside. These are one of the best meals we would do to celebrate a birthday or anything else. Brings a lot of members and how my family and me would all enjoy . 

 We started working on our essay for our test . Today I learned what factors influence human population size . I feel like brainstorming helped me a lot honestly. Like I managed stabilize a little bit more to be honest. I still have a lot to learn I’m not very proud on not finishing my essay but I feel like I can do better with brainstorming more on the day before. 

 Today we started practicing on our draft and learning how to do it . I also learned how things can flip overnight and you should always be prepared no matter the situation. Drafting is a process of an essay because it helps you annotate and edit things down that need more improvement. This helps to make your final draft better . It helps improve and practice for your final draft . 

 Today we worked on our evidence sheet .today I learned that being alone can change you a lot and how you view things. The parts I struggle with would be developing a thesis statement and how to form an introduction . I struggle because I forget it’s three parts for the thesis statement. I found it easy when we have to give our claim and evidence to back it up . I feel like I don’t struggle as much when I already have the evidence written down . I plan to improve on knowing how to form the introduction and how to be able to style it. 

 Today we worked on quotes and our claims. Today I learned to show more actions then just claiming a word . It would be piedmont college or ink tech college or Georgia state . Piedmont because they have really good courses with welding the career I wanna do and it really interest me . Ink tech because that’s a good school also for being an electrician manager which could also be a good experience. Georgia state because they have pediatricians courses that I also have in mind and it’s a really good school for it . 

 Today we worked choosing our own prompt and create our new cluster. Today I learned how people can love you or be by your side and still wanna stab you in the back .The strongest idea I came up with was searching for meaning. I chose this one out of all of them because it stands out a lot for what the purpose of a journey truly is. 

 Today we worked on common lit . Today I learned that working hard makes you realize how much you can improve in such a little amount of time . I think a thing I learned seeing the viewpoint in person of a college . I feel like this is important because it matters the size and location . The school’s culture matter because it’s going to be the environment you are going to be around with while attending college. 

 Today we finish answering some questions on canvas and worked on our essay. Today I learned how artificial intelligence is getting so much power of technology that teachers can’t tell weather it’s human of technology work , which is mind blowing how things can get out of hand . Some things I would change is the grammar . Another thing is remove words that aren’t needed in my paragraph . I would go over it and make sure it makes sense. 

 Today we started working on our theme and our claim and body paragraphs . I learned how sometimes getting out of your zone can show growth in yourself. I think it’s important to use your own words because if young people use artificial intelligence we can’t really express or read the writers feelings . We need creativity of human doing the work not a computer that knows to do the work but not in a way as humans can comprehend at moments . It better to read a persons mind then computer technology. 

 Today we worked on body paragraph first page . Today I also learned how being good pays off when not even looking for it . Finish g the claim was a bit challenging ,but after I understood the message of Cheryl’s growth I was able to comprehend . Another thing that I struggled through this layout and brainstorm for this essay I found it difficult to find evidence to suppose my body piece . 

 Today we worked on an assignment . Today I learned how sometimes we have to change for the beneficial of our own health weather it’s mental or physical. I’m okay on doing essays they are a bit struggling because i get stuck with writing down a theme . For example I also struggle on having enough evidence to support my claim or having enough sentence to explain it.