How did the writing process (brainstorming, drafting, revising, proofreading, and finalizing) shape the strength of the final essay, and what was learned about your personal strengths and areas for growth as a writer?

 We started working on our essay for our test . Today I learned what factors influence human population size . I feel like brainstorming helped me a lot honestly. Like I managed stabilize a little bit more to be honest. I still have a lot to learn I’m not very proud on not finishing my essay but I feel like I can do better with brainstorming more on the day before. 

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