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Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 Today we finish answering some questions on canvas and worked on our essay. Today I learned how artificial intelligence is getting so much power of technology that teachers can’t tell weather it’s human of technology work , which is mind blowing how things can get out of hand . Some things I would change is the grammar . Another thing is remove words that aren’t needed in my paragraph . I would go over it and make sure it makes sense. 
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Today we discussed why academic writing must reflect your own thinking and understanding rather than relying on artificial intelligence to generate your ideas. After learning about the expectations for authentic writing, reflect on why it is important for students to write essays in their own words.

 Today we started working on our theme and our claim and body paragraphs . I learned how sometimes getting out of your zone can show growth in yourself. I think it’s important to use your own words because if young people use artificial intelligence we can’t really express or read the writers feelings . We need creativity of human doing the work not a computer that knows to do the work but not in a way as humans can comprehend at moments . It better to read a persons mind then computer technology. 
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: Today we focused on constructing a strong literary argument paragraph about Wild and whether discomfort is necessary for meaningful personal growth. After working through the claim-evidence-analysis structure, explain which part of the paragraph was most challenging for you and why. Do you find it more difficult to create an arguable claim or to move beyond summary in your analysis?

 Today we worked on body paragraph first page . Today I also learned how being good pays off when not even looking for it . Finish g the claim was a bit challenging ,but after I understood the message of Cheryl’s growth I was able to comprehend . Another thing that I struggled through this layout and brainstorm for this essay I found it difficult to find evidence to suppose my body piece . 
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Reflect on your experiences with essay writing. What aspects of writing essays do you find most engaging or challenging? Discuss your personal strengths as a writer as well as specific areas where you experience difficulty or would like to improve. Support your reflection with clear examples from your own writing experiences.

 Today we worked on an assignment . Today I learned how sometimes we have to change for the beneficial of our own health weather it’s mental or physical. I’m okay on doing essays they are a bit struggling because i get stuck with writing down a theme . For example I also struggle on having enough evidence to support my claim or having enough sentence to explain it. 
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